It wasn't long before Gerard started manipulating and controlling the poor girl. I really like Rebecca, she's so sweet, a bit naive but it's not her fault-she's young. In a twisted sort of way, I also like Gerard's character as well!!
I love how you go in depth with their feelings. Can't wait to find out what happens next! xx
Author's response
I love Gerard's character in this twisted little tale and yes Rebecca is extremely naive but like you said it boils down to her tender age. I'm glad I'm getting their feelings across as that's very important to the story. I'll update as soon as xo