Review for Lich
well...while it definitely is an original story, i can't but agree with the ones who rated it as a train wreck, at least at some points...
you throw the reader right in the middle without explantations...
it would be nice if -what you started in the 2nd chapter- tell now the story from the start...
explain how harry knew he was betrayed by his friends, when he was captured killed and in another dimension...