I'm noticing there are a lot of bits of this story that used to exist (and made it better, in my opinion) are now missing. What gives? Why is did the section where they went on the log ride suddenly missing?
BTW, I'm sure a lot of people are complaining about "Harry's maturity" and the like. Personally one of the reasons I like this story is because the characters not only want sex but they have it. I mean whether or not I was 'ready' for sex, I was certainly perusing it back when I was in high school. I have read reviews where people say, "EGADS! They are 4th years! How could you write that!" and I'm thinking if my girlfriend had been willing, I'd have gone all the way back in my "4th" year. So I think Harry is being quite in character for what he had to go through and him being a guy.