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Review for
Innocence
Innocence
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HeartbreakhOtel
2010-07-06
sounds pretty good so far, but one teeny suggestion : if you could space out the sentences and dialogue, it would be easier to read, it's slightly confusing when it's jumbled. But other than that, I'm looking forward to an update
xo