It is a bit confusing right now, but if you continued it im sure it would unravel and make more sense. I hope you have a direction that you want to take your story in because it might fall apart if you dont have a clear direction. I hope to read more from you!
Author's response
Thank you for reviewing. =]
and yes, there is a particular direction I'm taking the story. In fact, I have the ending already, its just the in between I need to figure out. And its suppose to be confusing, but it'll all make sense soon. I hope you'll keep reading. Thanks again for being the first to review, it means a lot to me.