I'm personally not a fan of MCR, but I do love a good read, and you more than accomplished the latter. I love your writing style, I think the chapters could have been longer, but I understand, being a (and I hate to sound as if I take myself seriously by saying this) bit of a writer myself, so I get having to cut some things short.
I sincerely hope you pick this back up, because it's amazing, and let's just say I think I broke something reading it myself.