Hey! Okay...1) Zombies = WIN!! 2) Alicia going first = DOUBLE WIN!!! 3) Frerard till the end = YOU ROCK!!!
I think you can pretty much say I loved this little one-shot of yours =) And never ever ever keep ANY idea, no matter how silly it may seem, in your head. You never know what good may come of it if you let it out. If it sucks, there's ALWAYS the delete button lol.
Awesome job!