I got a little lost right before the part where it said the net had been hanging too high now and she'd break her neck and such and then right before Julius decided that he'd let Delilah go.
But otherwise I was fine. Personally I think it wasn't one of your best chapters but it's okay because it's probably essential to the plot...
Author's response
thank you for your reviews!
I know it's not really good and confusing (I'm partly confused myself) but as I said, it will - hopefully - make sense in the end.
I wanted to experiment a little as I'm not in practice at all... see how far I can go and so on.
sorry to make you my guinea pigs ... and thanks once more for every review I got!