Review for Serpent Souls, Merged as One

Serpent Souls, Merged as One

(#) ROBERT_1958 2010-08-02

The following ideas and questions I have, are not ment to tell anyone how to write their stories. I like characters that think. Thats why I have the ideas that fallow, use them or not:

Where are all Harry Potter's Fan Mail and Gifts he should have recived if he is so famous?

Albus Dumbledore as well as Minerva McGonagall and Hagrid (Minerva McGonagall did not stop Dumbledore from Harry going to the Dudleys, as well as kidnapping Harry, and Hagrid brought Harry to the Dudleys) needs to made to do HARD labor, without using his Magic in the Goblin mines till they DIE, for putting Harry with the Dudleys, as well as, if ilegial blocks and or spells were put on Harry by Dumbledore, as well as the Dudleys to goto prison for what they did to Harry.

EVERYTHANG that Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Severus Snape, and the Dudleys have need to be given to Harry, for what thay have allowed to happen to Harry.

-> Hagrid just needs a good warning about what he did to Harry on Dumbledore's orders as Hagrid is a smiple trusting person. It would be good if Hagrid could finsh his Magical schooling.

-> Albus Dumbledore put Harry with the Dudleys, so Albus Dumbledore is
just as responble as the Dudleys for how Harry was treated by the
Dudleys, as Albus Dumbledore was an accessory to how Harry was
treated by the Dudleys.

Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK (for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others) and bond to Harry.

In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.

Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.

-> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,
thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.

Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Hagrid and Dudleys need to be punished for what the Dudleys were allowed to do to Harry.

Albus Dumbledore, Minerva McGonagall, Hagrid, Snape, should be punished for what they allowed Harry and other students to go through at Hogwarts.


Fawkes needs to unbond with DumbleDORK (for what DumbleDORK has done to Harry and others) and bond to Harry.

In the Harry Potter and mostly in the Fan Fics Dumbledore never gets in trubble for what he allowed Harry to go through at the Dudleys or at Hogwarts.

Snape needs to goto Azkaban for all the thangs he has done to Harry and his family.

-> Snape over haeard the prophecy and repoted it to Voldemort,
thus puttig Harry and his fmily in danger.


Realy good story, looking for more.

Author's response

Fumblebore and the greasy bat will pay for what they did, if the Greengrasses have anything to say about it.

The Dursleys pay in the next chapter.

Fawkes, I'll give some thought to, but not right now.

Thanks for your review.