This was not shitty in the least. It was great. But the alcohol lol, I do believe that underage drinking is illegal here in the US =P Hopefully Patrick comes to his senses in the next chapter.
And btw, sorry for not leaving a review on the last chapter, I had read it at work on my Zune HD & it would've taken forever to type one out lol, but I'll go leave one now =)
Author's response
xD Yeah I know but I figured when you were a mercher for FOB you get special perks lmao