Review for Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

Holly Evans and the Spiral Path

(#) longreachjones 2010-11-13

Another simply marvelous chapter. I loved your take on the second challenge and the tip of your hat to Frank Herbert was very nicely done.

Here's looking forward to more arse-kickery Holly style.

Author's response

I'm glad you enjoyed reading it- I had a great time writing it. In particular, I think I've captured the quintessential Ron Weasley- loyal, funny, ready to stick his foot in his mouth with verve!

I hope everyone enjoyed my personal lampshade moment (during Harry's interview), the homage to Snow White and the new, improved Sirius Black, currently disguised as a cross between Willy Wonka and Gary Oldman's version of Count Dracula.