Review for This is our Beautiful Lie, Sweet Heart. 100 Suns Until We Part

This is our Beautiful Lie, Sweet Heart. 100 Suns Until We Part

(#) dannieleto 2010-12-12

It's so beautiful, and I saw a little inspiration on my story (maybe I'm being convinced ;b)
"I wasn’t going crazy like the other girls trying to pull him off stage and I wasn’t screaming I was just singing like normal" - I remember writing that ;D
“Why yes that is my name” he smiled at me again" - Jay said something like that in my fic, too xD

Don't worry, I won't take it badly, it's great you used some of my stuff (if you really did ;b) 'cause I "stole" your nickname to Jared ;D

LOVE 30STM, Echelon Family, always **,

Author's response

hehe Thanks, I hope that was ok using a tad of yours. Your words just worked so well with my story and that is what I would really be like :)
Do you mind rating mine?
That would help so much thanks

Also if you find anything worth in my story you can use it :D

Same here the Echelon family is the best.

I updated my story with 2 chapters now by the way :)