I'm sorry, this is a great story, it has a lot of action and a great plot, but could you please use spell checker and put in some puncuation? I can't understand a lot of it. . .
other than that I love it!
Author's response
Hi like super sorry about that
the thing is i figured out how to update via my phone and it dosent have spell check i will try super hard to spell things right in the furture
thanks though :)