Woah!
This is insanely awesome!
I like it.
Lots.
It's really different and it kind of reminds me of the Gunnerkrigg type of writing, if you're familiar with it.
Can't wait for more.
Author's response
WOW! Thanks so much! But i must warn you, this is going to be REALLY different. Gerard will be the same type of person but he's going to be a normal person with a normal job. Thanks so much for the review. I'll try and update as soon as I can! And I'll Google Gunnerkrigg.