Review for It's Not Your Fault

It's Not Your Fault

(#) TakeThisToMyGrave 2010-12-23

Sticks bottom lip out
This was rather upsetting.
But I'm glad Gerard ended up alright!
You could perhaps have drawn on Frankie's guilt a little more, maybe gone into more depth and detail. But, otherwise, this was really good. I enjoyed :)

Author's response

thank you :)
i might just go back and edit it a little