Review for I'll Jump, Then Fall

I'll Jump, Then Fall

(#) shortygirl 2011-01-16

Well im glad her Gee are together again but i feel for her and her sister

update soon

Author's response

Thanks for the review. I was really scared I was beginning to lose some of my readers because of all the problems happening to Gee and Rose. Personally, I think in a series there should be one book that has a lot of complications in it. IJTF is that book for this series.

I've been through many life changes like Rose so I know that the characters' emotions and personality changes throughout this time. That's why Rose is being portrayed as such a lost an confused girl. I also wanted to show that Rose isn't the only one who's changing (so she doesn't seem OOC). That's why you can see Lilly's emotions and thoughts changing.

Once again, thank you so much for reading and reviewing. I look foward to your reviews because they aren't simply: Good chapter. Update soon. I like seeing what you noticed in the chapter overall. It makes me know Ive done my job as a writer right.

-Emiley