I really like your writing, but I’m not a big fan of the changing P.O.V all the time. It’s not bad and you do it well, it’s just not something I personally like.
Author's response
Well, thank you. To be honest, I never used to write with a changing POV. I did for this story because it was easy to tie together that way. I do that with a few of my stories to give the reader a better idea of what the characters are thinking, though I will admit that it can get confusing. Thank you for the review! =3