Hey man,I liked it and I love how you stuck to fanfic guildlines and you used Ryden and not one of the boys and some random,made-up chick! No one,at least not me,comes on to this site to hear about some random girl and their favorite male celebrity! I think I speak for many when I say that I want fictional gay sex between the members of my favorite bands,P!ATD being my favorite band,Ryden my favorite slash pairing. Sweet,somewhat,but not too innocent,and well written. I really enjoyed it. :)