Review for Hold your breath, kid!

Hold your breath, kid!

(#) xxKilljoysxx 2011-02-04

really good story, real intense!!, i was literally holding my breath the whole time. PLLLLEEEEAAAAASSSSEEEE let Frankie live!! :L. Keep it up bud. xx

Author's response

thank you, it's nice that you reviewed :)
hehe really? awww well thats why i call it hold your breath, kid! lol

I try haha thanks xx :D