Dude,I love it! Please tell me that is not the ending though! You nearly had me crying at one point! That's hard to do to me! I don't cry at books,movies,other pieces of fiction,etc.! When you nearly make me cry,you know it's a good story!
I'll keep reviewing your work when I see it if you'll do the same for me. Well written!
-Adnarim Smada