This is a brilliant story. Most HP/SW crossovers have him becoming a jedi right off the bat. I really like the idea of having him be a Clone commander and the fact that you are hinting that a few of his clones want to jump him is great. I like the Jealousy from Amriah. it is highly amusing and i cant wait to see how that all plays out. Will he be returning to the HP universe? If so i cant wait to see the reactions of everyone there. Excellent work, i cant wait for an update.
Cel