hehehe awesome chapter :) i feel sorry for little Frankie and Gee at the start though...so cute! xD okay, i'm basically gunna read and review all the chapters now lol
i think you portrayed them really well as kids- a lot of writers dont do that :/ but i think you did :) can't wait to read more!
CosmicZombie xo
p.s. dont know if you're still reading it, but i updated "you'll never fit in much, kid" yesterday, and i'm gunna update again in a few hours xD if your interested n my crazed ramblings.. but, yeah, i'll shut up and go read now...and i'll try not to give such long reviews
each time haha!
Author's response
awww wow thank you sooo sooo much that is purely one of the nicest things ever, i am over the moon you think that :)
hehe sorry it gets better :) i hope lol
thank you thank you thank you!!!!
i reallllyy love your reviews really :D
they are soo nice and make me wanna carry on so thank you soo much
SOOOOOO glad your reading
and of course i love your story, i think i revied it :) will check it. It really is great :D and no the longer the better, however you want to review them :D
the more longer there are shows me that you really like my story and thats really nice :D
XXX coz