I have just discovered this excellent story and spent several hours reading it and have to say it's been time well spent.
I like that your heroes have flaws and don't know all the answers, and are willing to listen to others and take advice.
The slow torture of Dumbledore and Voldemort is inspired.
Looking forward to reading more
Author's response
Heya tumshie!
I do hope you've allowed yourself time to take care of the non-essetials...work...sleep...food...that kind of thing.
It's too often (although as time goes on, less prevalent) that the characters are portrayed as perfect,(Say .that/ three times fast!)and IMO flawed characters are more interesting.
That harry is willing to listed to aqdvise is part of his canon personality, though there, he''d nly accetpt it from Hermione, whom he trusted. (Book sux doesn't count!)
Dumbles & snake lips. Aah, revenge! How wonderful it is. Too many people want me to simply end their existence, but where's the fun in that?
More is on the way.
Alorkin