Holy Fuck. Pardon my French but... Whoah.
I just found this today and read everything you have so far. I like it better than the other. Which is saying something.
This is really amazing. I kind of like the darkness of it. :)
I especially though Frank's dream was very cool. gives you thumbs up
Seriously though, just sayin', this one better have a happy ending.
Can't wait for next update
(ps I wanna go at James with a chainsaw)