I think this will be a good story and I can't wait to read more.
P.S Start posting longer chapters it's always great to have more to read :)
Author's response
Thanks for the review! I would post longer chapters, but I wrote this story years ago and it's already complete. Over the years my chapters have become longer and I've (hopefully) become a better writer. My latest story "The Best Things" has longer chapters.
Thanks for the input though. It's greatly appreciated!