im not much a girly girl who would sqeal at the slightest sighn of cutness.this is the type of story that makes you actually think that the word does have a few people with a heart.i can honestly say that i wenr "awwwwwww!" the first time they kissed.and i havnt done that in idk how long.you really do need to keep writing on this.add more chapters.its one of those stories that mak all us freaky scene people wanna scream like a pink loving freakish girly girl.so yeah..i love it.