awww, that was one of the sweetest chapter's i've read! i'm not usually glad when characters die, but steve was an exception- he definitely deserved what he got- i mean, seriously, who could hurt adorable little Frankie?! so glad Gerard and Frankie are safe- the cliffhanger on the chapter before got me worried...lol xD i loved the way you made this chapter emotional (as it obviously needed to be haha!) but not too overwhemingly so- the extent and the way you portrayed the sadness and the relief and everything was perfect :) good stuff! can't waaaaaaaait to read the last chapter, even though i'm really sad it has to end :( this story is defo going in my favourites xD loved the last paragraph- I was just standing by the swings, admiring Gerard from a far. Everything just seemed so perfect now and I knew being with Gerard was one of the best things that’s ever happened to me. I feel like there’s a whole weight that has finally lifted off my shoulders, and I am finally three and this is defiantly where I want to be for sure.
Author's response
hehe thanks :D i'm really glad you think so
hehe lol defo haha he deserved it lol and OMG this is defo the right length for your reviews haha i was getting worried for a sec XD lol
and thank you i have done better but its really nice to hear what you think and support me :) haha thanks i will try and make it the best that i can hehe aww thats really great thanks lol it really does mean a lot that you take your time to R&R and read and then leave me massive reviews hehe i really love them they always make me smile :D
more next week
xx coz