By the way, I'm sorry for the munching. That was my friend dicking around with the computer.
Also, I'd just like to make one last point before I leave this story to "go write something". I respect the author for their response, I thought it was honest, mature and generally WELL WRITTEN. You have a good point as well and I like that. But I wasn't trying to improve your writing with my first review. I was trying to get my opinion across that I think this story is sick and I don't like the fact that people are portraying sexual abuse as hot or sexy. Call me a "pissy bitch" call me what you will. Write on, sunshine. I just don't agree with some of the other opinions about this fic.
As for midnight dreamer I'm sorry if I offended you. But whatever your opinion, saying that people deserve to be raped with a drill is rather trashy. But of course, who am I to decide who's crossing the line? Just an arrogant pissy bitch, right? And a raped one at that.
Okay. I'm done here. Don't stop writing by the way, it's really not that bad. I'm just disgusted by the content.
Over and Out.
Author's response
Thats fine, I was confused at first why you might do that.
I'm not gonna call you anything for stating your opinions but a little "i dont think this is right" would've sufficed but hey sometimes its good to talk more with varying views. Everyones entitled to an opinion and have different tastes etc and I understand that rape won't exactly be embraced by everyone, it's not as if I would want anyone to be treated in any such way. I just write it, and I don't know why to be honest.
I will keep writing, I know not everyones gonna love my stuff but that won't put me off. Again, I'm considering putting After Class up to an NYC-17 though I am unfamiliar with US rating systems.