Okay, Stephanie Meyer, you have me stumped at who's Bella and who's Edward. I mean, Frank is Edward, but he's acting like Bella and... I don't know :( It just seems... Is Twilight your new obsession? I mean, I feel the works of a good story already here, but don't forget, Twilight is Twilight. You need to make it Forbidden, okay?
I know that the beginning is all Twilightish but that's only because I was getting a feel for the story, ya know? Seriously, I used to love Twilight but I hate it now :/ don't worry this will get better xo