I wrote a story called Top Broom as well, but I like your much much better.
I believe you have captured the essence of Top Gear and it's presenters.
thank you for the fun story
TimW
here's the link if you are interested
http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4670838/19/Story_fragments_and_pieces
Author's response
This is the first review I've gotten on the story from the FicWad site.
Thank you for your comments, and I will be looking at your story as well.
Thanks again,
Rick