:O
No fucking way.
I saw you on LiveJournal! And I mean, I was hooked! Shine I haven't read yet, but you're on FicWad! This is awesome!
Okay, since this is a review, aw, I loved the smut. I mean, you focused on the feelings of Mia, it wasn't just some readable porn for your mind to imagine. How she knew she was playing Frank though I loved also. 'I knew what I was doing, I wasn't drunk.' was my favorite line in this chapter. For Mia to be smart enough to act drunk, then get him upstairs while acting like a smart drunk was simply amazing.
Sorry for the long review. Update soon!
Author's response
Thank you! I hope you like Shine! And yeah I just joined FicWad, I don't even know how to use it yet or anything, haha.
That's what I was going for! I mean don't get my wrong I love a good smut now and then but for this story I think it needed some feeling. And Mia is sneaky isn't she, haha.
Never apologize for the length, I want to heard opinions good or bad!