Review for Halloween

Halloween

(#) FlyingSmoke 2011-04-17

Thank god, Bob made it. I thought he really was gone for a second there, meaning Frank would spiral into an unloving-boyfriend enduced depression. Gerard was smart to save Bob the first time, and apparently it wasn't Bob's time, as he came back from flat lining for three minutes.

Very awesome to describe death, too. I mean, the whole thing was pretty cool. It was like Bob was truely dead (which, really, he was, but...) and seeing everything, wondering why while the whole time calm.

Don't apologize for the short chapter, some great things come in small packages.

Update soon!
And sorry for the long-ass review.

Author's response

Haha, don't apologise for the long ass review they make me happy XD
And ah I'm glad you're happy that Bob made it :] I tried to go for something unexpected describing the death thing, so I'm glad you liked that too :D
Thanks for reviewing ^_^
xo