Wow just read this whole thing, I can`t believe your so young and write like a bamf! I`m glad Violet Rage got her shit together. I did not see that kiss coming, I was more expecting Frank to shoot him! Good job can`t wait to see what happens next.
Yay, warm fuzzies making reviews. Gracias.
Ah, the kiss. You'll just have to wait until the next chapter to see reactions ;)