OMG wow i loved it and hated lol it was just so sad and i really felt sorry for them i hope you make them okay. Its hard to know which path they are going to.
AND omg you even put the lyrics to talor swift 'should've said no' :O
I LOVE THAT SONG SO MUCH.
"You should've said no. I should have been there in the back of your mind, I shouldn't be asking myself why.."
loved it :)
its awesome when you put lyrics from a song in tour story and it went so well :)
great job can't wait for the next chap
choawwi chaz
xx
Author's response
Tehe XD
thankyou!
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