Ah shapeshifters. Right. I was confused. Maybe make that a bit clearer or maybe I'm just very, very stupid.
I think you would make a great writer. This is such an awesome idea and the writing is also really decent. Just keep at it and taking the criticism. You'll improve more and more.
Author's response
KV no offense dear, but I really don't want to change anything about my stories if they're written the way I want them to be. I love that you like my story enough to comment and try to help, but I might not make changes unless i see the need for them. It something every good writer has to think about.