Oh my fucking god! Noooo! Sweet mother of Tomo don't let Frank die or anything like that please! I want to cry so bad right now. I'm on the edge of my seat wIting for your next update. I mean Gerard and Mikey's father is taking pleasure in beating the life out of Frank like him he did to Gerard not so long ago. Why didn't Frank start running after he turned around? He knew they were following him. I just hope it makes it alive, I don't really cre if he is well just alive.
Random idea I got just now for your next chapter: Gerard hears everything over the phone or something like that but is too shock to go save Frank. He instead calls the police and gives them the address to the pub his father usually goes to. Frank gets rescued by the cops with just a weak grasp on his life. Police call an ambulance an it takes Frank to the hospital. When Ways go visit Frank Gerard says "Frank I'm so sorry I should have gone to save you myself" (or something like that) and Frank says "Its alright. You didnt know." Then Gerard looks at Frank with tears in his eyes and replies " Yes I did. I heard the whole thing over the phone. I couldn't do anything but just listen to every punch and kick. When everything got quiet and ran to took Mikey's phone to call the police. I'm so so sorry."
Author's response
Heya, thanks for the suggestion. Sorry, I'd already posted the next chapter before I had read this. You've got some really good ideas though! Thanks so much! xx