That was an even better chappie then the last which I didn't even think was possible, I would rate this straight away but I don't have any more rating points, I'll be sure to rate it when I do though, you be sure of that, and did I sence a minor Atlanta and Jay moment there? Anywho please update as soon as you can, and also that ther story you're writing, I can't remember what it's called at this very moment.
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thanks... i love this chapter it my fave! congrats on seeing that vital moment