I didn't understand a couple parts, but mainly,is Gerard real or is Frankie just imagining him as well?
Other than that, your writing is very desciptive and well-thought-out. Good Job. I could picture myself watching these two guys perfectly, like in a movie. Very Nice.
Thanks :) when I wrote it Gerard wasn't real and it was franks imaginary friend to keep him safe but I like readers to have their own interpreatations too :)