Review for "Be My Detonator."

"Be My Detonator."

(#) cup-full-of-blood 2011-05-31

OMFG can this get even more perfect i really dont know what to say, your writing is tooo good XD lol
i love it.

I can tell i will be a lil more than obssessed with this story lol XD
cant wait untill you update.

“Hmm…possibilities.” Mikey grins. “Na, don’t listen to her, Gee- don’t let her get to you. One day she’ll get eaten by hungry moosi like she deserves. Korma, y’know?”
“KARMA, Mikes, not korma!” I snort. “Korma is a kind of curry.”

this made me lol seriously, not many stories do but this did. SOO CUTE. i LOVE how you portrayed mikey in this awww.

and jamie is a bitch, what she said to gerard was really mean :(
lol

tho gerard told her XD hehe
I scowl angrily at her. “Jamie. Trust me, it’ll take a lot more than pink nail polish to make you look even halfway more human and less bitch. I think a plastic surgeon might work better.”
lol i say that to the plastic girls at school hehe

love love love love it :)
and if gerard gets upset i think someone can make it better lol wink wink

hehe cant wait for more
chazom
xx