"Harry came to think of Lucian as a father after all the time they spent together. They had also discovered that Harry was descended from Lucian after a one-night stand."
Crud, this is funny. You should play this as a comedy.
Why would Harry feel the need to become an animagus if he can change at will into a kickass lycan?
Holy crud. This is so over the top. You could turn this into a comedy easily.