Review for He Needs a Vacation

He Needs a Vacation

(#) DragonSilk 2011-06-06

The shift from second person to first person was a little bit disconcerting. Maybe divide it by chapters in the future to lessen that a little?
But overall I thought this was adorably fluffy. It was a nice little read.

Author's response

Thank you ^^ I was originally in separate chapters, I kind of got lazy with reposting after I organized my account.