hey! I'm really enjoying it so far, and for some reason I literally fell in love with this sentence: /As he looked outside at the bare trees getting drenched by the icy downpour the single tear dripping off his chin onto his lap became two, then three, and soon they were pouring down like the midnight rain pounding on the bedroom window./. I found it really beautiful :). Other than that, for the whole frerard thingy, I actually don't know. I mean, I'm a total frerard fangirl, but for some reason I see this story more about friendship than love...I dunno...I'd bring Frank in but maybe just as a really really good friend. I dunno, it's your story, so you decide XD.
xx, a.
oh, and one really random piece of info: I'd love a misfits shirt too XD
Author's response
Thank you!!! This really means a lot to me. And yeah for the Frerard thing I was thinking more like a best friends thing too