AAAH! Frankie better be okay!
I'm really liking the beginning btw :D
...if I could mabye give you a tiny piece of advice though...maybe try adding a little more detail...
but it's still really good! update soon!
xx, a.
Author's response
Thanks for the review! and don't worry Frankie will he won't die and yeah I'm trying my hardest to put as much details as possible :D