Review for The Things You Never Told Me

The Things You Never Told Me

(#) AnotherKnifeInMyHand 2011-06-13

i agree with the above, this should be more about friendship and what not. this was a really moving chapter. it might help to have a time skip to starting the new term at school (not immediately but i'm sure you don't want to narrate every day of winter vacation ) i love this :) update soon.

Author's response

Thank you! That was what I was planning to do. I didnt think you'd want to read through every day of their vacation haha