The first chapter rocks! And I don't think it sucks, I think its... EPIC! :D
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thank you so much!!!!! You made my day. You really really really made my day!! and Im sorry I didnt respond before, I feel stupid saying this but I... didnt know how to :S (im new in this website so I mess up a lot) but really, thank you very much, you made me very happy :D :D :D :D