Dude, this would be a ('cuse my French, American, whatever you wanna call it) fuckin' awesome Broadway play. They actually did Helena on stage once, in London? I saw a clip, and it was awesome :3 God, now I sound like a douche... But yes, this is awesome. I can kinda see where this is going, but then it switched when I know. So good job for keeping it unpredictable!
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well for the main plot there is also going to be allot of themes from Revenge's album, Act 2 is on the way and this one will be a very "black" musical number