Smoke, her hair is black isn't? Shit mow you confused me I don't remember her saying it was blond, shit now its going to bug the hell out of me.
Well anyway, you did a mighty fine job with this chapter, I actually feel panicky because of this. Mental torture see I told you maybe it's just me, but it really makes me uneasy.
And hmmm do I smell water boarding in the future? Or swirlies?