you should continue it, you are such an amazing writer. i loved it soo much. i agree with the comment about how you could continue it with problems of them being married and stuff. it would make such an awesome story. it's cool if you don't want to but if you do you have one eager follower, and cause it's so good i'm pretty sure i won't be the only keen follower of it. anyway, that was my hugely long rant on this truley wondeful story. seriously i have never written such a long comment. that's how epic this story is :D
lots of love
- kirrah xx
p.s please please PLEASE consider making this into a full story with chapters and shiz, please! xox