aww don't change it cuz it's already perfect! I really fucking loved your story and I'm exited for more :P (You don't get rid of me that easily ;) but also I love your writing style. I mean some sentences.. they really have a meaning, it's soo beautiful, like poetry. it's amazing! thanx for the amazing story!
Loves,
me
Author's response
Wow, thank you so much! I will be writing more(: Thank you so so much(: xxx