Awe, it's okay to admit that you like writing in my pov is because I'm so fucking awesome. I really need to learn to knock on doors in this story AND in real life! I walk in on my brother and his girlfriend making out in his room e.O I forgot she was there. I also have a nasty habit of doing that with bathrooms too, walked in on my mom, if she wasn't pissing already she would have pissed her pants from how much I scared her lol.
I'm really happy Mikey knocked that shit off, I seriously wanted to kill him after he hurt my little Frankie! And I'm glad it happen with no one getting thrown into the street in front of a speeding car. I love our fucked up retarded family. I'm glad Hana is apart of it. And with the smut shit, you don't have to go into detail or anything, but you know it kinda needs to happen eventually. Hell have them about to do it, change into someone else's pov ::coughminecough:: and either make them oblivious to what is going on upstairs or have them giggle at them or some shit like that....or do nothing it was just an idea.
And by the way the last time I rode a horse it ran into the stables.....with me on top of it. Thank god I have a secret identity as a ninja or my face would still be on the wall. I'm glad no one was a cunt to you, no one deserves that.
And another by the way did you write that poem or was it from something else, either way it was really good.
Can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's response
lol yeah, try walking in on your parents... not fun
and im not exactly finished with mikey yet and i will put that chapter up tonight so you can see what i mean and i think that idea quite good but there will me some more before the story's over
yeah well there's this twat that works there and we complained today and he wasnt as knobish
i kind of stole the little poem thing from bvb song its the chanting part at the end of new religion
wow you wrote alot thanks for that though, made my morning good xXx